Saturday, February 1, 2014

Creative Writing


Tomorrow

Yesterday
She screamed for help
Asked for someone to come and save her from falling
deep deep into oblivion

Today 
She waits
For someone to come and rescue her
From the monster developing inside her body

Tomorrow
Won't happen 
Because she yearned for a rescuer
But no one came
Letting the monster overcome her body


1 comment:

  1. Wow.
    That was so powerful i can't even begin to explain how absolutely amazing that was. If i explained all my feelings towards that poem, we would be here for quite some time. You wrote a full blown story in just a couple lines, and you word choice was incredible. I loved this poem SOOOO much!! Amazing job!

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